Talk:LOTM: Witnesses of Sleepy Hollow Spin-Off - Firenza Junior - Back into London (Part 1)/@comment-24912277-20190117033304

Great episode! The expansion of Helene's character according to this scenary of World War III will help a lot in her development. In this era of WWIII, our characters from SoK eventually change little by little, some in the good and bad ways. You're planning to add or change something else in the characters' personality as the war goes on?

Anyway, I'm still trying to understand Carl's true objectives. We know that the world "rejected" him and know he wants to be a monster as he has nothing holding him back like love, family or friendship, but what exactly is his plan? Destroy mankind? Create a new world by cleaning the sin of humanity? It's rather hard to understand, much like what is currently happening to Katarina, that is more deep and complex to understand. We all understand that he suffered, but in the end he is like Katarina who just wanted to believe in what he wanted, he wanted people to act in the way he wanted (correct me if I'm wrong), so when none of them acted the way he expected he wished to destroy everything.

I must admit the scene Maria cut off Carl's head is one of the most memorable moments of this story. If he hadn't become the Headless Horsemen, it would be one of the most shocking moments of CIS Productions yet as it put an end to the life of one of the misunderstandings characters of your story, ever. Putting the end to the life of secondary or major is different when you take out the main character of the lead. Instead, of Carl, I'm starting to hate Cain who obviously is pretending to share the same feelings of Carl to achieve something greater... it's true he has hatred for mankind but not so critical as Carl's... speaking of Cain, he will receive a background like Carl and others characters? Having the villain have his own act is awesome as well.

As for your comment below, Kristen is marrid with Crow have children. Did her children will ever have their own page or have an important relevance in your story much like Rinslet Couteau?

This is all I have to say. It's a refreshing, epic and wonderful literature! You sure too long enough but your action to split the episode in half was good. We thought about doing the same for Kiss of Death... actually, we can still split it but it would be pretty much disappointing to have Katarina's huge development being divided. Incredible episode, Officer! I might read it twice xD!

Good luck with your next episode! :)