Talk:LOTM: Witnesses of Sleepy Hollow Horsemen Saga - Sin Eater/@comment-24758512-20190613012511/@comment-5032898-20190615060459

Those off-screen rape were changed into a more discreet form, merely off-screen sexual harrassment and implied attempted rape as I'm still writing a more conservative 14+ story. I also rewrote Pedro 7 years younger to make him just 4 years older than Selina. In the old script, he was 12 years older than her, which might be utterly disturbing considering he was fond of Selina in Order of Strawberry spinoff, when she was merely 14 years old at the time.

Recently, while the story was absent, I decided to rewrite some parts of characters in my draft as I recently discovered there're some unnecessarily disturbing subtexts in my draft that I wasn't fully aware of. Some parts of Pedro was included. He would still be a perv in the new script, but the writing would be more conservative about his villainy.