Talk:LOTM: Witnesses of Sleepy Hollow Spin-Off - Firenza Junior - Return of Old Friends/@comment-24758512-20180124014721

I finished reading, wow! Long read! I was watching Devilman in Netflix, good violent stuff but shitty ending. Well, anyway, I'm glad you introduced one of my OCs in your stories. Not only 1 but three with Katya in the previous episode! THANK YOU so much as it will help extend their appearance a lot In-Universe! I see this episode had HALF of its plot introducing Cain abusing Carl's sanity and messing up with his emotions! I thought he was going to break through violence like Katarina always do but his was even more voluntary, making me think he willingly joined Cain instead of letting Moloch consume him mind.

Also, glad you brought two old characters back and even more developed, Eva and Adam. If I was you, I would prefer changing her style (physical appearance) from the beginning, since her first appearance in Corbin Files, it would makes things more logical as she suddenly had a transformation. However, the story is yours so do at you will, yet what changed her appearance during her wrathful moment?

Again, another thing I wish to thank you is for using my deleted scene! I was going to make that scene a part where Godom Empire tries to took off intel from Protestant Church about MPS to start their assassination and their true plans but you did it more good than it was suppose to be at first! Thanks! Adding those images and not using it would be a waste!

Excited to see the battle of London! It seems it will be a very long episode as you planned many ideas for your next episode as seen in Next Episode section!! Awesome episode, this was one was even better than the previous one as you managed to put the comedy moments while in tense moments like Maria's conversation with the creature (funniest moment ever XD!)

Awesome work bro, and good lucki with your story :D