Thread:Jester of chaos/@comment-28302658-20160918033407/@comment-4708882-20160926031911

I officially got the first three parts finished. I rather enjoy the concepts and everything but I would like to point out that some parts lack capitalization, puntuation a lilttle might need a little re-twiking on words, and some parts have onlyone or even no " ". I do like it but I felt I should point these tiny things out. I hope you don't mind.