Talk:LOTM: Chaos Simmers: Lost Challengers Arc - Angel's Spear/@comment-24758512-20191105160151

So what I recommend you to do is create the terminology articles for your story, like the characters, tools, organizations, events, timeline and such things because there are characters, organizations and even places that are being introduced out of nowhere, causing a little mess in our heads as we don't know what is happening and who are the characters being introduced.

The grammar and pace of your story is okay but we only need to find ourselves in this story. Actually, what is happening? I'm lost in this story, the New Earth is being invaded?