Talk:LOTM: Sword of Kings AA 2nd Season - The Will of Qliphoth/@comment-5032898-20180312101700/@comment-5032898-20180312235548

Not a problem. Matt is intended to be light-hearted, jovial and comedic in my story as well, as I want him to be a foil to Carl, who is almost 100% serious with only a few of unintentional funny moments and black humor.

As for Maria's human side, I think it's good since I had the same intention as well, like how I made Maria almost spoke profane in the seventh ep of Firenza Junior. I was unintentional at the time, but Sub and Meta both praised the part. Therefore, introducing her human side would be good in the story as many fictional work are stuffed with Mary Sue heroine that is TOO FLAWLESS to be realistic and likeable. This will break the cliche of Pure of Heart heroine as we saw too many in some other works.

CR-Unit would be indeed useful in my future story as Maria would have battles against the likes of Vanifer. If Maria faces Vanifer without CR-Unit, Vanifer will be nigh-invincible for her. Vanifer is perhaps the most powerful elemental prophet, even stronger than Vizeran DeVir, also someone who has a competent personality of a no-nonsense nemesis (like Charlotte Katakuri from One Piece).

About Artemishia, that's okay. There's no problem adding her in Arzonia Family as I felt sorry for her. Adding her budding relationships with Matt will also be a good step to develop her personality. No problem :)