Talk:LOTM: Witnesses of Sleepy Hollow Horsemen Saga - Howe's Remains (Part 1)/@comment-24855009-20181122042150

I'm pretty late, huh? I saw your message to Mistress, Officer, she will be back by tomorrow. She is busy in other things in her daily life. So was I. In my case today, I used Prime's account to write the last part of Act 3 of Valentine episode. It pisses me off we still have a lot of work to do in this episode and in the next one.

Now, I'll be very short towards this episode. I don't have the ability to process many things of the genre so I lost myself in some parts. I forget what is happening, the names of the characters, the sudden introduction of characters and then disappearing... I think this is the bad thing of introducing too many characters in one episode. I can't process the events happening in the story, but that's only in my case, the others seems fine. Now, this episode is very small indeed, and our next episodes will based in the size of this one... yes... until now we did not know how we would make small episodes. This one just gave me a brilliant idea!

Ahh... Bones I watched only a few episodes before dropping it. It didn't awake my interest like Supernatural or Sleepy Hollow, that are series with mystery and dark fantasy genre fused with detective genre. I still pissed that Bones, a series so cliche still got more seasons than Sleepy Hollow, that did it better. I see that most of the Bones' parts were taken from the original so far, but there will more involvement of them in your story? As "warriors of light" to fight against evil forces of Moloch, Qliphoth or Triggers Hell, they are not really classified but I think they would make a good job in the criminal investigation section, something very common in your story.

Also it's funny how the episode takes KK and From Hell Letter and inverts it premiere. We already know the killer from start and we see her helping in the investigation... but I still confused if she is avoiding being caught by turning all proves against another person. Also, there is a reason for her killing-spree, don't worry about the spoilers!

Enjoyable episode Officer! Sorry if I took too long, I see that you and the rest are waiting to edit Part 2! :D