Talk:LOTM: Witnesses of Sleepy Hollow Spin-Off - Firenza Junior - Nio/@comment-25468117-20180402031800

I tried what I could in the first act. There were a few mistakes aside from the "stopped" and past words in the present. Oh boy, I hope I can see Nio dead already. She is not that hateful like Eckidina who commit cruel acts while displaying no likable, but her attack-and-run tactic is making this annoying. The heroes always fail to kill and so she continue go wrecking havoc without punishment. Sure, she suffered a lot of damage due to acting directly with her enemies but we all know this is not enough.

The most new thing in this episode is how Maria received less focus compared to the previous episode. You sure used this episode to focus more in other characters and develop more of their personalities and make progress in their faith.

Also, I may committing a mistake but this is the second episode you connected the Elemental Evil with the original storyline, right? So far we saw two of them (correct me if I'm wrong). More importantly, I think this is the first time they are getting directly involved in the story thanks to Gar who gifted Noelle with the power of the Water of Life.

Anyway that was an awesome piece of work Officer! Sorry I took so long to come, I was studying and problems with driver license! I hope I can get more of this story in the next episode! The battle of London is surely to become the next city-level battle of CIS story! The last one was Aldegyr's battle so I'm excited to see the aftermatch of this war!! Epic episode bud :)