Thread:Jester of chaos/@comment-28302658-20160918033407/@comment-4708882-20160928133014

It is good but for example in part 4 Joker says let him put a smell on a characters face instead of smile, Hera says "General wants happened" instead of "Gerneral what happened" and most lacks punctuation with occassionally a missing " or space that takes that line and makes a scroll box. Like I said I enjoy it but these can at times be a little distracting and  most if not all work (even professional) can be improved.